Life in One Page

I've been playing with a load of other wannabe cartoonists over at At Millarworld recently, and set up a challenge to depict someone's entire life in a one-page, nine-panel story, and see how far we could push the envelope within that restricted format. Here's one of my attempts, in which the narration only covers the entire life (second-hand), and the panels cover a single moment. Does it work for you?